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Ownership of mobile phones has risen dramatically in recent years despite the potentially harmful effects they may have on our health and on society. Governments should introduce measures to restrict ownership of mobile phones to those who need them for their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There are two kinds of
people
 in
this
 world. Introverts, who like to stay away from
people
 and live in their personal space, and extroverts, the ones thinking that the world is full of magnificent things waiting to be explored. Even though both of these
people
 think that the other
are
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 weird, both have them have logical explanations about the way they live Introverted individuals' motto is “There is wisdom in regularity and repetition”. They think if they find the best meal, which covers all aspects
about
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 the eating process
such
 as nutrition, taste and health, there is no point in finding and exploring other meals.
This
 example is the same in all other areas like finding the best local coffee shop, best furniture or best daily routine. If they find balance
all
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 these different areas, they feel like they are completed and they can
finally
 live in peace. If anyone tries to break
this
 cycle or force them to explore new things they are definitely accepted as the
most evil
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 person by them.
On the contrary
, if you ask extroverts if they want to be part of
this
 cycle, they probably choose death over
this
. Each passing day brings us closer to death and spending the day with the same routine is a complete waste of time. These
people
 like to discover different foods, cultures, stories and friends and the way they feel while trying to find these things are more important than the conclusion. Adding new experiences in their life means that they achieved the purpose of life ).
Therefore
, there is no way for them to get along with
the
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introverted person. All in all, I personally accept the fact that we are mortal and we come into
this
 world to explore and feel as much as we can but finding energy for these assignments every day is a huge deal.
Therefore
 there is nothing wrong with preferring the good old routine once in a while.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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