Some believe that younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting older family members when they become physically, mentally and financially unable to look after themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Without a doubt, children of the family are solely responsible for their elders when they are in a state of sickness both mentally, physically and without money.

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, when making it legal, there should be a provision to consider other party views.

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with, the legitimate reason to take

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of elder family members, when they are in a woeful situation is, they are the reason for the descendent's birth and their survivance in

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world.

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, grandparents could have sacrificed their health and wealth to bring the children. So, youth have an obligation to look after the family members and be

an exemplary kids

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, it shows a path to their offspring when they are old and in traumatic problems.

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, in

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contemporary world, there are a number of elderly

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services are available, in case the youth do not have time to take

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of their old. To exemplify, retirement homes offer a wide range of services from basic accommodation to nursing

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. Kid's need to provide financial support to let elders live a happy life.

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, create a stronger familial relationship and be a role model to society and the

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generation.

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, some parents who never took after their kids, should not be entitled to receive these legal rules. In conclusion, young adults of the households should take

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of ancestors and it is indispensable on the moral grounds for humankind and adding a legal aspect to it is an extra step is necessary to protect both parties.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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filial piety
elder care
aging population
public resources
state welfare
financial burden
legal mandate
family dynamics
moral responsibility
residency
integrity
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