In some countries, using the internet in schools is getting more popular. Is this a positive or negative development?

As national barriers are slowly being broken down through trade, integration, and technology various organisations in society are being influenced especially by the
internet
. Nowadays practically all academic institutions are connected. Whether
this
is a beneficial or detrimental development is discussed in
further
detail below.  On the one
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, there is ample evidence to suggest the benefits of the
internet
are increasing, especially related to an academic environment.
This
is because when a school is connected they have faster access to more information.
Furthermore
, it can bestow increases
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.
For example
, in certain schools across the UK matters
such
as absenteeism, disciplinary procedures and general communication can be performed over the
Internet
through email.
Therefore
, it is clear that being connected to the world wide web entails positive implications. 
On the other hand
, being connected to the
internet
has grave dangers and could even lead to an overreliance.
This
is due to the fact that undesirable facets of society have potential access to innocent children.
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into the habit of consulting 'Google' for answers may be argued as putting too much faith into the hands of technology companies.
For example
, due to modern marketing techniques
such
as SEO and ,
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it is not difficult to tamper with search engine rankings.
Therefore
the over-reliance on technology
instead
of traditional knowledge could be questioned.  To conclude, there are both negative and positive aspects to consider,
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due to the wealth of information, the conveniences that have been gained so far, I am strong of the opinion that school
internet
connectivity is a positive development.
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