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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effect they have in terms of health on society?

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Nowadays, in some countries,
cosmetics
 that can help
people
's
skin
 become more white and light, have become more popular.
This
 trend has its origins in the history of many Asian cultures because in the past if you had white
skin
 it meant you were from a royal family
moreover
, you had a higher score of your
beauty
.
Therefore
 society believes that to
this
 day they are ready to spend a lot of money on
cosmetics
however
, because of the high standards of
beauty
, some
people
 have health problems. Several reasons can be clarified about why
people
 apply lightening
cosmetics
.
First
 of all, every person wants to be beautiful
furthermore
, one element of
beauty
 in Asian countries is white and light
skin
.
For example
, Korean society has a higher standard of
beauty
, if you have a small and white face, you are gorgeous but if you have a dark face, you need to use
cosmetics
 that can help your
skin
 become whiter
therefore
, women and men spend cash on these speciality
cosmetics
. Now, a lot of cosmetic brands use a lot of advertising in public places, where they show the benefits of white
skin
 and that their products will help achieve these results.
On the other hand
, due to
beauty
 standards, some
people
 have mental health problems because they don't meet these standards
moreover
, they feel pressure from society. In statistics, оne in nine citizens goes to a psychologist because of criticism of their appearance. In conclusion, the intention to be accepted in a community by maintaining a certain
beauty
 standard is the main motive of
people
 using lightning cosmetic products and the health-related consequences of these traits are decreasing the mental well-being of
people
 in the community.
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