Crime is a big problem in the world;Many people believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
Committing
crime
has become a major global issue. Some experts are pessimistic about actions that are done by governments to control it. From my point of view, although
it is too optimistic to expect a totally
clearance of Change the adverb
total
crime
, reducing the crime
rate is possible in many aspects.
Since many crimes
are guided by powerful illegal companies, it is impossible to tackle this
issue properly. Managers of these companies are making a huge profit yearly by breaking rules in many fields. This
leads to high efforts to find new ways for them even if governments do their best. For example
, the owners of addictive drug companies provide their dealer
state of the art equipment to overcome the threat of the police.
Fix the agreement mistake
dealers
On the other hand
, many crimes
are committed by youngsters or poor people. In this
case, if the socio-economic status of these groups improves, the crime
rate may face a sudden drop. Governments and Non-governmental organisations can have a critical role in reducing petty crimes
. They can improve the infrastructures of the country and make various job opportunities. This
may result
an increase in employment and the income of the poor ones.
In conclusion, there is no way to get rid of Add the preposition
inresult
fromresult
crime
, especially major ones. Because there is a lot of money and power behind it. However
, some crimes
have stemmed in the poverty and may be prevented if proper actions are done.Submitted by Sinakhayatzade on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite