Machines are taking over more and more jobs previously done by humans. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

Nowadays there is a growing concern over the substitution of humans for

machines

. A great number of positive and negative aspects of

this

revolution are being discussed by experts. I believe that the disadvantages

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with the advantages. I will discuss some of these incentives and drawbacks in

this

essay. On

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hand,

machines

have undoubtedly brought us a lot of benefits.

First,

the arduous occupations which are not only dangerous for employees but

also

implausible are being done by vehicles now.

Secondly

, it has resulted in manufacturing products in huge amounts with faster and better outcomes.

For example

, it takes about a year for a human to weave a carpet by hand

while

machines

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hundreds of carpets with various designs in a day.

lastly

, a portion of

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of products is being paid to the

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which can be omitted and result in cheaper products.

On the other hand

,

although

there are definitely some benefits with machinery product, it has brought us a lot of problems. For years artificial intelligence had been viewed as a safe substitute for mankind but recently people

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a fresh look at it after mistakes that have been made by it.

For instance

, surgeon robots were expected to provide better surgery on patients;

on the contrary

, they have resulted in many deaths.

In addition

, watching

machines

doing our chores might be preferable to doing them by ourselves but it suffers from disadvantages that put a lot of people at risk of unemployment.

Moreover

, laziness will ensue.

To sum up

, designing vehicles to

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to a faster job with less effort and expenses. I am not completely in agreement with the above-said view because more defects, unemployment, and inactivity are inevitable drawbacks that should be taken into account.