Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel and work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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only migrants and working professionals should learn
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language
, others claim the use of
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language
is versatile. In my ,opinion I believe that foreign
language
is a very strong tool for communication and development.
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, the world is becoming
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community with the help of the internet. many peoples from across the world are coming together.
moreover
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the international
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in addition
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think
language
should be a
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powerful
tool for communication rather than a
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barrier
. any individual should learn a
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foreign
language
not just sake of travel or work but
also
should learn for personality development. for e.g, I want to
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cause in
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but because of the
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could not. to understand
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culture
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and traditions of any other country
one
should
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learn different
languages
.
On the other hand
, some masses think abroad
languages
should only be
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useful
for working professionals and travellers because there is no use of
language
for other
indiviuals
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individuals
to learn
moreover
instead
of spending time to learn foreign
languages
they can that time on other learnings which help them to grow. In my opinion,
one
should definitely learn different
languages
for better
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opportunities
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personal
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addition
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think it will
also
improve our reading skills.and it should be considered as
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activity for others To conclude, If anyone
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diffrent
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different
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languages
they will probably get better
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opportunity
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, it should
also
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