In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that modern life today is becoming more and more expensive, so some families consider it necessary for

parents

to go to

work

. The question is, do the

children

in

this

family benefit from the income or do they feel they lack support due to the absence of their

parents

. I'll take a look at each of the presentations and give my own opinion in closing. ‏in

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, some people say that the ‏

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reason given to support

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parents

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the fees of

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The mother is responsible for the things that

children

need,

such

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such

as

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life and happy family. ‏

On the other hand

, the absence of

parents

may affect the

children

.

First

, when

parents

go to

work

at the same

time

for long hours, the kids stay alone for a long

time

.

For example

, it can affect the education of

children

because their

parents

focus more on their career, and mothers and fathers have less opportunity to play and spend

time

with their

children

and

this

affects their

children

's

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,

in other words

, it may lead to some diseases

such

as autism. ‏In conclusion, I believe that we cannot change the fact that

parents

should

work

but

parents

should make

time

for their

children

so that

children

do not suffer emotionally. With the

work

of both

parents

, there will be additional income and a much higher standard of living, which will bring benefits to all family members