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In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some feel that the current global obesity epidemic should be primarily handled by
governments
. In my opinion, though the state has a key role to play,
this
 is mainly the duty of
parents
. Those who argue in favour of
this
 contention point to the power of governmental regulation.
Governments
 hold
this
 responsibility not just because their job is to safeguard public welfare but
also
 because they are endowed with the authority to enact real reforms. In some countries, there are strict laws about the products that can be advertised during
children
’s programming and their maximum sugar and fat content. Countries that do not have strong regulatory bodies to create and enforce these laws naturally have considerably higher rates of obesity. In an ideal world,
governments
 would be more responsible for public health in
this
 crucial area.
However
, since
governments
 often fail to protect the public interest,
parents
 should take responsibility themselves.
Parents
 can best achieve
this
 by leading by example. If
children
 are not given sugary soft drinks, candy, and eat a diet constituted of mainly vegetables and fruits, they are likely to develop lifelong, positive eating habits.
For instance
, in nations
such
 as France where food and nutrition are taken very seriously, the majority of
children
 do not grow up addicted to unhealthy American fast food and obesity rates are lower. Admittedly,
this
 can be difficult for
parents
 from lower socioeconomic backgrounds who may struggle with finding the time, energy, and finances to provide nutritious meals for their
children
. In conclusion, the government can regulate certain industries but
parents
 must themselves instil healthy habits in their
children
 for there to be a meaningful impact.
This
 issue may have reached a high point and must now be addressed.
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