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Planting Trees Is Very Important. Some People Say That Trees Should Be Planted In The Vacant Areas Of Towns .Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that cities and towns should plant
trees
 in the empty areas, which are not being used by people.
This
 essay agrees with the suggestion, due to the positive changes
this
 step can provide.
Firstly
, we will discuss how
trees
 can improve the
air
 quality of nearby areas,
then
 we will discuss the role of green plantations to reduce global warming. It's not the hidden fact that automobiles, industries and greenhouse gases have a detrimental effect on
air
 by emitting
carbon
 dioxide and other harmful gas into the atmosphere. The plant has the characteristic of converting
carbon
 dioxide to oxygen, which helps purify the
air
 around us. For an instance, Many towns in
india
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 were suffering from smog for decades. Even though the government took many steps to curb
this
 issue, all the attempts were failed. A decision was taken to increase the plantation around the township which have a shown positive effect.
Furthermore
, planting more
trees
 can help humans and other beings to fight one of the inevitable problems of global warming. Global warming is caused by
carbon
 dioxide and greenhouse gases trapped in the outer atmosphere, because of which the earth is getting hotter each passing year. Planting
trees
 can help us to fight
carbon
 emissions, which can reduce the effects of global warming.
For example
, a town named Raigad located on the coast of the Arabian sea has planted around 2 million
trees
, which has resulted in a decrease of
carbon
 emission by 38 per cent and have a target to reduce it by 60 per cent. In conclusion,
trees
 will play a vital role in humans fight against
air
 pollution and global warming. In my ,opinion everyone should at least plant 3
trees
 for the betterment of our planet.
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