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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Happiness
 is an essential part of the life of many who define
happiness
 in different ways. In my opinion, the reasoning makes
people
 to
happiness
 which depend on various activities or satisfying feeling about what they really want. In the following paragraph, a reason to support my opinion will be discussed.
Although
 many
people
 think that definition of
happiness
 is just only wealthy which many
people
 will expect to rich in the future or love which make many moods, there are more reasons who define
happiness
besides
 wealth and love,
for instance
, the top of position in their occupation so they can work all day for
this
 success, some
people
 like to respect by
people
 around without the love and the success for some
people
 is famous whom many citizens know about them. A determinant of achieving
happiness
 is many methods.
Firstly
, you must aim for a goal, which each
people
 have a different, and set a certain time to finish the goal that you choose
such
 as job, loving, financial statement, respect and being a famous person.
Secondly
, improving personality is the essential key to success. If you cannot improve, you were not meet the goal easily.
Finally
, if they cannot reach the goal,
then
 they changed the goal for
happiness
 which it is possible to do in that time. In conclusion, many
people
 are distinct ideas about what is made to
happiness
,
thus
 they must find themselves. By doing
this
, the goals, which each
people
 aim, are close to reality and
this
 is the right way for
people
 in achieving
happiness
 and they can find the definition of
happiness
 in their opinion.
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