Spoken communication is always stronger than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Although

there are many reasons persuading

children

to eat junk

food

, I do agree that

children

have an unbalanced diet these days. They are more dependent on unhealthy foods rather than eating healthy

food

and health is a major issue among

children

today.

As a result

, they are overwhelmed by various diseases,

for instance

, diabetes and heart disease. The

first

reason is unhealthy

food

adverts on the media are attractive and

children

get influenced by seeing them.

In addition

, these foods add ingredients to make them more delicious than homemade

food

. Many people believe that their parents and school must solve

this

problem as soon as possible. I completely agree that parents and school have an important role in their life,

therefore

, they have a vital responsibility.

Besides

,

healthy

Add an article

the healthy

a healthy

show examples

meal

Fix the agreement mistake

meals

show examples

should be provided at home and school and

also

, by educating

children

about the result of eating junk

food

we can curb the problem. In conclusion, I believe that both parents and the government should take action imidietley and make the situation better.