Nowadays tourism often leads to environmental destruction. Why is this the case? What are the consequences? How to solve this problem?

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many
countries
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tourists
are big sources of income and of
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great value.
However
, it is clear fact that host
countries
ought to give rewardable service to visitors from food and housing
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means they take advantage of natural resources.
This
essay will discuss the detrimental influence that people especially
tourists
can have on our environment and provide how our community can regulate some rules to ease the forthcoming issue.
To begin
with,
countries
can have many sources of income, but
tourist
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can be
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one amongst all. the more visits a country
recieve
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receive
receives
in a year, the higher increase in its (
refrencing
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referencing
) budget can be witnessed. To fulfil
this
desire many unspotted lands have undergone modernization to attract the attention of people. To illustrate, Mazandaran one of the Northern cities of Iran has breathtaking and spectacular sceneries that can have worldwide attention. The municipality has done deforestation to build more houses to welcome more
travelers
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.
Furthermore
, humans discharge their waste improperly
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environment
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. (, vague use ) ending up in the natural beauty spots having been demolished due to human activities and just for the sake of so-called
tourists
. Having said that, there
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number
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of measures that can be taken to resolve
this
immense destructive ,
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could be to introduce stricter forensics ( or legislation) for building holiday resorts, recreational
centers
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as well as accommodations and enforce the prohibitive laws against
modernization
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process of the above cites. Another remedy for the governments would be likely to impose fines and punishment for those who pollute the globe our habitation and dispense with ( or discard) their garbage especially plastic (unrecyclable materials like plastics )in the environment. To conclude,
tourists
have been so of the price for many
countries
that it adverse effect that it can cause has been overlooked, unless governments establish more strict laws and enforce that small companies and agencies to be following the
instructionsit
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instructions
instructions it
can’t be anticipated to that we can planet our from tourist’s recreational
activitie
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activities
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