Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is a view stating that the increased extinction of particular
species
of animals and plants is the most important environmental problem of our days, Use synonyms
while
others, including me, believe that there are more serious issues.
On the one hand, those who advocate for the seriousness of the Linking Words
loss
of Use synonyms
species
might highlight the principle of niche. Niche is the environmental role that every living organism has, by which groups of Use synonyms
species
are classified into sections Use synonyms
according to
how they contribute to their Linking Words
habitat
and their role in the food chain. Use synonyms
For instance
, thinking about the impacts that the Linking Words
loss
of bees has on the environment, despite the disappearance of honey, bees play an important role in plant pollination; Use synonyms
thus
, their leaving the ecosystem will lead to a decline in agricultural production. Looking particularly at the notion of food chains, if a carnivore Linking Words
such
as a lion suddenly disappeared, the number of herbivores would dramatically increase, leading to a lack of food supply, so they would either starve to death or die Linking Words
due to
an epidemic among members of their populations.
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On the other hand
, the reason behind the aforementioned ecological problem is actually another one with a greater threat. Linking Words
In other words
, problems, Linking Words
such
as deforestation, are the main reasons for Linking Words
habitat
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loss
which stimulates the continuous extinction of a variety of Use synonyms
species
. Use synonyms
For example
, tropical rainforests are home to numerous amount of creatures ranging from tiny insects and rare plants to the extent of large predators like jaguars. Linking Words
Therefore
, excessive cutting and damage that occurs to Linking Words
this
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habitat
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due to
human activities Linking Words
such
as deforestation, or natural forest fires will leave a wide range of organisms homeless, endangering their existence. Linking Words
Moreover
, it will lead to an increase in the level of pollutants in the atmosphere, causing a lot of health-related issues.
In conclusion, Linking Words
while
the worsened impact of the Linking Words
loss
of animals and plants is undoubted, focusing on the reasons that cause the enlargement of that problem, Use synonyms
such
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habitat
Use synonyms
loss
, should be our initial approach to tackling Use synonyms
such
obstacles.Linking Words
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task achievement
Consider providing more detailed examples or explanations to further clarify how issues like deforestation affect species extinction and environmental health.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next to enhance the logical flow of the essay.
task achievement
The essay presents a clear response to the task, addressing both views and providing a personal opinion.
coherence cohesion
There is a well-defined introduction and conclusion that frame the argument appropriately.
task achievement
The use of relevant examples, such as the role of bees and the impact of deforestation, strengthens the arguments presented.
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