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Writing Samples
Band 6

Your local newspaper had an advertisement asking people to help with environment projects in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: describe a local environmental issue in your area explain how you can help suggest how the problem could be avoided in future.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my
intrest
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interest
 to help in the
environment
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environmental
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 project, which will take place in our
are
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area
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. My name is Pramod, and I am
an
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a
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 Data engineer working at a tech company. I am living on 2nd Street, and I have read your
edverisement
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advertisement
 in a
news paper
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newspaper
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 about
need
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the need
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of
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for
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ovlunteers
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volunteers
 for different projects to improve
natural
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the natural
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eco-system
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ecosystem
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 of our area. To explain
about
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apply
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environmenal
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environmental
 problems in our locality, there is an issue of waste collection.
This
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 has been an issue for a long period of time, and many complaints have been filed in the local council but have not received any
promissing
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promising
responce
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response
 from them.
Moreover
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, rising
corbon
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carbon
emission
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emissions
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due to
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 the increasing number of vehicles on the roads. As I am an environmental activist, I have knowledge about methods of
saggrigating
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segregating
aggregating
 waste.
Additionally
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, I can promote
use
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the use
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 of public transport more
instead
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 of
own
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owning
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vegicle
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vehicles
. It is necessary to make sure that
thses
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these
 problems do not happen again. I would like to offer some solutions to them.
Firstly
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, there
have
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has
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 been an urgent need
of improving
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to improve
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 public transport in the area so that it can reduce private vehicles on the road.
Therefore
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,
corbon
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carbon
 levels will be
decreaded
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decreased
 in the air.
Secondly
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,
improvemnt
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improvement
 is needed not only in garbage collection but
also
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 in sorting the waste materials so that
it
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they
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 can be recycled. Thank you for your time and
considerations
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consideration
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. Hoping to
here
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hear
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 from you soon. Yours sincerely, Pramod

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grammar
Check for spelling and grammatical errors to enhance clarity.
paragraphing
Ensure paragraphs focus on a single main idea for better clarity.
greeting and closing
Clear greeting and closing structure, which enhances the formal tone of the letter.
writing tone
Appropriate tone and language for a formal letter to a project manager.
logical structure
Logical structure in describing the problem, proposing help, and suggesting future solutions.
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