It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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It is believed by
people
in some countries that owning a
home
is more preferable and important than renting one. I believe that any decision, especially in living cost management, has been considered thoroughly by comparing the advantages and disadvantages.
This
essay will explain why
people
choose to buy than rent a
home
. There are several factors that
people
are considered before choosing to own or rent a
home
. One of which is the increasing
price
of a property from time to time.
For example
, a housing
price
today is 3 million rupiahs per meter.
Next
year, the
price
is predicted to increase by 5%. The housing
price
normally increases every year.
Thus
, many
people
believe that owning a
home
is a good investment.
Although
the
price
of a
home
is expensive, many
people
can not afford to buy it. As a consequence, they have to pick the renting option. Looking at
this
situation, there are several schemes offered by each country to support their citizen to own a house.
For instance
, in Indonesia, the government subsidize a house for each citizen. The
price
of the subsidised
home
is discounted up to 50% with a credit payment.
Therefore
, owning a
home
is very possible for everyone from the richest to the poorest. In conclusion, I think the culture of
people
to own a place to stay is a positive thing. Because a house is considered a safe place for everyone,
people
do not need to think about the billing issues once they have a
home
.
Submitted by Kusuman.retno on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • preventive measures
  • chronic diseases
  • healthcare costs
  • public health campaigns
  • lifestyle-related illnesses
  • quality of life
  • health-conscious society
  • allocate funds
  • balanced healthcare system
  • comprehensive healthcare strategy
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