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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: • explain why you want to take time off work • give details of the amount of time you need • suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear sir How are you?I hope you are fine .I am writing
this
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 letter to into your notice I
take
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am take
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 holiday to my job because I am going outside with my family. I am working in your office as an online sailing it works is very important to companies because the whole system depends in its moment but I am taking off my
work
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 because I am made a plan go outside with my family members because my brother sends me invitation about the family party. I am not meet my family in a long time so it is the best time to meet my parents and I need some help with It
firstly
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 You give me 7 days off and give me
advice
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 salary because I take some gifts for my parents and you don't worry about
work
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 because I covered my
work
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 after
this
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 week and I will try to continue
work
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 in off time but I sure I am complete my job. I hope you notice my own letter and send me a message about it.give my regards to your family. You are fatefully CYZ
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Respectful greeting (e.g., 'Dear [Manager's name],')
  • Time off, absence, leave of absence
  • Personal circumstances, compelling reason
  • Duration, number of days/weeks
  • Cover duties, delegate tasks, work handover
  • Alternative arrangements, contingency plans
  • Preparation, advance work, assistance
  • Gratitude, appreciate, understanding
  • Inconvenience, minimal disruption
  • Request approval, formally request
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