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Summerise the information by slecting and reporting.

The given pie chart describes the information about the book sols through a bookseller in different kinds of five books namely,
Adult
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fiction
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,
Children
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's
fiction
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, Biography, Travel and others over the forty
years
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 of the period from 1972 to 2012, units are measured in percentages. Overall, given all three different periods,
adult
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fiction
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 and
children
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's
fiction
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 were the major sold by a bookseller. According to the graph illustrates, in 1972, other magazines were the most sold, with an average of exactly one quarter, but twenty
years
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 later,
this
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 proportion was reduced by 5 per cent,
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, in 2012,
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 was reached at just 12%.
Adult
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fiction
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,
children
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's
fiction
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 and biography were the same amounts of sales rate in 1972, which is exactly one fifth. But, twenty
years
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 later,
adult
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fiction
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 was reduced gradually by 5%,
similarly
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, in 2012,
this
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 proportion was increased significantly than the past periods, with an average of 45%. In terms of
children
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's
fiction
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 was just above one fifth, but in 2012,
this
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 figure was increased, with an average of a quarter. Biography magazine was reduced by 5% from 1972 to 1992, but in 2012,
this
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 book sale was reduced dramatically, which is 8%. Travel article was 15% in 1972, but twenty
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 later,
this
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 article sale was raised slightly, which is 18%,
in contrast
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, 10% was reached by 2012.

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