Some people think that dangerous extreme sports such as rock climbing and sky-diving should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Over the

last

two or three decades,

sports

has been rising tremendously among

the

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humankind,

therefore

, they like to participate in all kinds of

sports

even peril games too.

However

, some believe that dangerous

sports

should be prohibited,

such

as rock climbing and sky-diving. I strongly disagree with

this

statement and

this

game

should not forbid,

this

essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, most extreme dangerous games should not be banned because all

sports

have numerous amount of perils not only

this

kind, the jeopardy, it depends on

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mankind how much they have experienced about

this

game

.

For example

, a plethora of western

nations

have banned these kinds of games in their

nations

, but

sports

accidents increase day-to-day.

In addition

,

this

kind of

game

gives a plethora of new

experience

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and

achievement

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who are participated,

this

part of

game

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, not only provides extreme danger but

also

the soft

game

can provide more perils,

therefore

, these

sports

should not be prohibited.

Furthermore

,

this

is the one kind of earnings in many

nations

,

such

as tourism,

this

can help to attract the tourist destination,

as a result

, mankind likes to visit these places for the only reason is rock climbing and sky-diving.

For instance

, India earns a million amount of dollars from these kinds of

sports

activities,

therefore

, numerous

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can visit

this

country for playing and

enjoying

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.

In addition

, if

this

part of

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should ban, the population can go to other

nations

for doing and taking fun,

therefore

,

this

should not be prohibited. To conclude, each every

sports

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have peril, not only

this

,

tourism

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industry can earn a plethora of capital from

this

as well as takes fun activity an enormously.

Therefore

, I strongly disagree with

this

statement in the above-mentioned details and these parts of

sports

should not be banned. I hope

this

process is conducive to taking numerous adventures across the globe.