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Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns as it increases the crime and violence in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Criminal activities, a major concern lately, have been linked considerably to the people in the possession of arms. Many are convinced that it is only for self-defence, while others believe under certain circumstances it may produce sparks of violence.
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 and are you in favour of the former. To be able to protect oneself
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 is a right every citizen must possess. When someone carries a gun,they can save themselves in adverse situations according to a famous news channel a girl returning late from work, was attacked by a group of gangsters, who could only save herself as she was carrying a revolver.
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, the government only entitled certain citizens to hold weapons, mostly responsible folks in need of it.
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 legal procedures have a lot of formalities as authorities trust these individuals, so shall we.
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, there is no denying that human beings have aggression as one of their basic traits, which can sometimes lead to violent deeds.
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, it could give rise to disputes, intrusion of a pistol could change the scenario.
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, it was observed many times that people have kept shotguns illegally which is absolutely unacceptable. To conclude, one may say that it’s a complex ground to debate, but I strongly recommend the privilege of legally possessing handguns. The aggressive community will continue to spread crime,
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, a vast proportion of a society could be saved with it.
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