To improve the job prospects,some people want the secondry schools to spend more time teaching communication and business skills and spend less time teaching history.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays there is a growing concern over the young generation's attitude toward jobs. Some people suggest decreasing the time of

history

course in schools and spending

this

time on

communication

and business

skills

.

Although

I agree with the above-said view, it is noteworthy to bear in mind that

history

is an integral part of our lives that should not be neglected. I will discuss my rationales for my agreement which is proceeding with the

extention

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exception

of replacement that I believe is reasonable.

First

, the twentieth century's improvement has been changing the framework of occupations.

This

modern framework requires a widespread circuit of

communication

due to the ability of access to worldwide businesses.

For example

, social media has made a platform that allows you to trade with other countries which need you to be familiar with these

skills

.

Second

, a great number of novel jobs are being produced in

this

decade. For years there were pioneers in every job who had been viewed as references for us to learn from their experiences but new occupations are like mysteries that can not be learned unless in schools.

For instance

, my father learned how to manage his store from his father but he is not familiar with online shops

hence

my brother needs to learn about

this

new job from another one.

Lastly

, the competition is growing and regarding be a winner you need to have great

communication

skills

. So

this

talent is playing an increasingly important role in our lives. On the other side,

history

is

also

playing an essential role in our lives. I believe that we will not be satisfied with our accomplishments unless we were aware of the

history

behind the journey that brought us in

this

way.

Consequently

, teaching business

skills

can be expanded provided that we make sure children are learning the integral parts of

history

. To sum up,

communication

and business

skills

are two new subjects that require more attention at secondary schools. It is suggested to reduce

history

courses and substitute them with these two subjects.

Although

I agree with their importance, it is in the best interest of our young generation to know the basics of

history

.