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Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Others believe the effect of modern music is positive. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, the
music
 has been changing drastically the lyrics and the rhythm of the melody. Especially people from older generations think is too much violence or sexual content and
this
 makes them disappointed and concerned about modern styles .
However
,
music
 is a kind of art and nobody has the right to judge about taste, the personal elections, in terms of what is good or bad listen to . There are genres of
music
 like rap and hip hop, punk the especial objective is to represent reality,
therefore
, their lyric is based on true stories from themselves, others, or social rejections to the system. Even though they have the freedom to express their opinions, the point is, that some people believe that
this
 style inspires vandalism, bad behaviour and crime. Is important to recognize that exists numerous genres of
music
 with totally different concepts like pop and ballads, and much more, and is not fair to consider the modern style as a whole same thing. Despite
this
, listening to a piece has a lot of benefits in terms of health. Modern medicine can prove that
music
 release the level of stress as helps mental function. Despite
this
, I believe that is not appropriate for young children, parents should be always supervising their kids, to guide them and help them to take good elections, children until 8 years old do not fully understand the meaning and they can repeat the words and sentences and learn vocabulary
that is
 not convenient for youngest
,
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 until they gain the maturity to make their own choices.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • lifestyles and behaviours
  • glorify
  • distract
  • academic performance
  • self-expression
  • identity formation
  • source of inspiration
  • social and political messages
  • amplifying
  • accessible
  • influential
  • parental and educational guidance
  • critically analyze
  • responsible consumption
  • mitigate
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