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Online classes make conventional classrooms unnecessary. To What extent do you agree/disagree?

Over the
last
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 two or three decades, technology has been flourishing by leaps and bounds in every
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, especially in
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.
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, virtual learning has been rising
tremendosly
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tremendously
 at present,
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, some think that
traditional
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classroom
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 teaching
method
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 is unnecessary due to online
education
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. I strongly disagree with
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 statement and
this
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 essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with,
traditional
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the traditional
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method
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 of
education
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 always gives enormous benefits to students. They can ask any doubts to their tutors in the
classroom
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 and they can study with
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fellow pupils,
therefore
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, sharing ideas and
clarififying
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clarifying
 doubts.
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, India has
innumerable
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an innumerable
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 conventional
method
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 of
learning
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the learning
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 system,
hence
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, all kinds of pupils can be learnt easily and can get a fair job with a handsome amount of salary. A plethora of successful persons
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 studied in the old
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 of teaching, they have a good life,
hence
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classroom
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method
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 is necessary for students and
online
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the online
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 system never dominates
this
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.
Furthermore
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,
online
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the online
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 learning
method
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 provides plenty
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 to students because
this
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 kind of learning system requires a
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smartphone
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smart phone
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smartphone
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 or laptop and strong internet connection, but
still
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 now a multitude of mankind cannot
affort
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afford
 these kinds of amenities across the world,
such
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 as under developing nations.
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, Sri Lanka's humankind has faced
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an economic
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problem
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problems
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,
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, they cannot
affort
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afford
 in these high standard facilities. Traditional kind of teaching
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method
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methods
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 can provide
the
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education
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 without needs any special facilities,
therefore
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, many nations adhere the
classroom
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 learning. To conclude,
online
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the online
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 training
method
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 gives tremendous benefits, even though,
traditional
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the traditional
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method
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 can provide the best
education
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 as well as
needws
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needs
news
 any special requirements,
therefore
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, I
stronlgy
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strongly
 disagree with
this
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 statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope
this
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 process is conducive to building a healthy society.

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