In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The controversial topic concerning public
health
never fails to attract public attention. As a result
of consuming too much junk food
, people in some countries are increasingly suffering from health
difficulties. It is recommended that governments should tax fast food
higher In order to prevent people from relying on it. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this
solution
because I think that increasing public awareness
would be more effective.
On the one hand, some believe that imposing more taxes on fast food
would be a good solution
to the
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health
issues. They have a good point since they know that communities are eating fast food
because it is cheaper and easier from cooking at their homes, but if unhealthy food
is expensive, they would be more likely to switch to other alternative
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other alternatives
For example
, unhealthy food
in the USA is cheap, so Americans have no other healthy convenient alternative. That's why their citizens are more prone to health
risks related to bad
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food
could solve the difficulty.
On the other hand
, others think that increasing awareness
towards the danger of unhealthy food
among communities could be more
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a more
solution
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, according to research, 85% of societies around the world, care about their health
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increasing public awareness
could be substantial to overcome health
difficulties that resulted from eating junk food
.
In conclusion, folks in some places in the world are increasingly suffering from health
problems, and It is beyond any doubt that unhealthy food
is to blame. Some think that governments should pose more taxes on fast food
to decrease the
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