Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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Dear sir, I am Deepak from the EEE batch, a final year student. I have learned from an article that there is a computer

course

that is

going to be started from the

week. I am writing

this

letter to request you to enrol me

for

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the class. As I mentioned that I belong to the EEE branch, computers

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not my core subject. But, I am very keen to learn computers as I have basic knowledge about

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, though I haven't formally studied

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. Unfortunately, the upcoming

course

is for those who have already completed an elementary

course

, which makes me not eligible to enrol. It would be very kind of you if you could enrol me for the

course

due to the knowledge that I have attained through youtube tutorials. I am pretty sure that I could cope with the advanced

course

with the knowledge that I have. I would be thankful if you could take my request into consideration. Yours faithfully, Deepak

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