Some people think that to be successful you need to get in a University education, whereas others say it is not true. Discuss both ideas and give your opinion.

It is generally argued that graduates are more successful in life than non-graduates, while some believe that it is not obvious. In my opinion, it is not necessary to study

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to become an achiever. In the

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paragraphs, I will discuss both views and elucidate my opinion. On one hand,

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degree plays a key role to get a job.

For example

, many companies are recruiting

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employees who are graduated in a specific stream or subject.

Moreover

, it has been clearly mentioned in the job advertisement that graduation is mandatory.

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, a certificate from

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becomes essential for employment.

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is one of the reasons people think that

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education makes an individual become successful. Because

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without

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or earning it is hard to run a family.

On the other hand

, people who have innovative ideas, do not depend on

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any

degree rather than they start their own business and make money.

For example

, Steve Jobs, who was a college dropout, established

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company and became not only successful but

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an inspiration for many.

Hence

, it proves that

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education has nothing to do with success.

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is just one example, but there are many others to support

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idea like Mark

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Zuckerburg

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, Sachin Tendulkar etc. To conclude,

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education gives career opportunities, whereas talent and big ideas do not require certain

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to become successful.