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The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?

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From the
last
 few decades,
technology
 has grown exponentially. It has been argued that
this
 development has negative effects ,especially on children, whereas,
technology
 has a positive impact on bringing
people
 closer, and it
also
 made
possible
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 to work remotely. In
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 I will examine both viewpoints and explain why I think that the internet has made a positive effect
in
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 the lives of
people
. On one side, the development of
technology
 has impacted negatively the lives of children. They spend most of their time playing video games which affect their mental health and wellness.
For example
, games like PUBG,
Counter Strike
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 made teenagers addicted and cause problems like mental pressure and anxiety.
This
also
 impacts their studies because they spend countless hours behind the computers playing video games.
Thus
, the effects of the advancement of
technology
 are bad for kids. On the other side, the internet has influenced a lot of lives in a positive way. With the help of
this
technology
,
people
 living in different countries were able to come closer than ever.
For instance
, social media apps like
twitter
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,
facebook
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Facebook
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, telegram allow their user to chat or video call for hours without any charges.
Furthermore
, the internet made it possible for users to work remotely from anywhere around the world for their employers. It has helped
people
 to be with their family while working for their company.
Hence
, all these advantages in
technology led
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technology-led
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people
 to a better life. To sum up, I do think that
technology
 has grown over time for the betterment of
people
 giving them the luxury to meet and chat with their old friends and perform the same work duties as the office while sitting at home.
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