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The pie charts describe the information about the regular meals contained three types of unhealthy nutrients
Sodium
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, Saturated fat and Added sugar in the USA, units are measured in percentages. Overall, it can be seen that clearly,
Dinner
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 represents the largest proportion of
Sodium
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 and Saturated fat, whare as
Snacks
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 contained enormous amounts of Added sugar. According to the graph illustrates, in
Sodium
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,
Snacks
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 and
Breakfast
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 both contain the same amount, at 14 per
cent
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. but,
Dinner
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 has the majority of
Sodium
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, at 43 per
cent
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 while Lunch is just below three out of ten amount of
Sodium
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. In Saturated fat,
Dinner
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 is exceeded in
Breakfast
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, at 37 per
cent
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 and 16% respectively. while Lunch contains just above a quarter amount of Saturated fat and
Snacks
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 is just over a fifth. In terms of Added sugar,
Snacks
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 is exceeded while in
Breakfast
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, at 42% and 16% respectively.
Dinner
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 is just below a quarter and
breakfast
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 is 16 per
cent
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 respectively.
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