Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is currently a contentious argument over whether

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in planting trees in rural areas as opposed to building new houses and apartments. I totally agree with

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opinion due to a vast range of reasons which some of

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will be addressed in

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essay. The main reason why I do believe we should put a premium on expanding

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areas in cities is

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they can improve the

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quality.

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is a fact that plants are capable of clarifying the

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by capturing some toxic gases and turning them into Oxigen.

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Furthermore

, they are literally effective in improving the view of the

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residential

areas.

In other words

,

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plants and trees have an

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influential

impact on beautifying the towns.

For example

, in Iran, a survey which has been taken by the government after expanding the

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area by 30

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in the capital city indicates that people believe that the

number

of

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spectacular

sceneries has been extremely increased and

also

electronic indicators show a marked decrease in

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toxic

gases in the

air

.

On the other hand

, the most significant

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why I dispute building new housing is based on the fact that by the growing

number

of residences,

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congestion will be expanded. The growing

number

of

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in an area is one of the

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factors in raising

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.

In addition

,

air

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pollution

can be counted as one of the most obvious results of building new housing. The increasing rate of rural population leads to using fuels more and more,

therefore

,

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pollution

will be inevitable.

For instance

, in

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city of Italy, raising the

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of houses by 20

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in five years has resulted in growing

traffic

congestion and

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pollution

by 40 and 50

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respectively. In conclusion, althghou it is a common belief that constructing new houses is considerably more important than planting trees, I completely disagree with

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Idea because plants can clear the

air

and improve the view of cities, whereas, more buildings lead to more

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and

air

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pollution

.