Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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in planting trees in rural areas as opposed to building new houses and apartments. I totally agree with
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opinion due to a vast range of reasons which some of
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essay. The main reason why I do believe we should put a premium on expanding
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areas in cities is
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they can improve the
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quality.
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is a fact that plants are capable of clarifying the
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by capturing some toxic gases and turning them into Oxigen.
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, they are literally effective in improving the view of the
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residential
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,
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plants and trees have an
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impact on beautifying the towns.
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, in Iran, a survey which has been taken by the government after expanding the
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area by 30
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in the capital city indicates that people believe that the
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of
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sceneries has been extremely increased and
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electronic indicators show a marked decrease in
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, the most significant
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why I dispute building new housing is based on the fact that by the growing
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of residences,
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congestion will be expanded. The growing
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of
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in an area is one of the
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factors in raising
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.
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,
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pollution
can be counted as one of the most obvious results of building new housing. The increasing rate of rural population leads to using fuels more and more,
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,
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pollution
will be inevitable.
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, in
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city of Italy, raising the
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of houses by 20
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in five years has resulted in growing
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congestion and
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pollution
by 40 and 50
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respectively. In conclusion, althghou it is a common belief that constructing new houses is considerably more important than planting trees, I completely disagree with
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Idea because plants can clear the
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and improve the view of cities, whereas, more buildings lead to more
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and
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pollution
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