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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

#people #lives #change
Some
people
 think that they like a routine activity during the day. So they do not want to change
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behavior
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. While many
people
 like to learn new
things
 which make active to them nowadays. In the following paragraph, a reason to support my opinion will be discussed.
Although
 someone feels excited to learn about the different
things
 which they used not to do, some
people
 like to do similar
things
such
 as they do not open-mind about learning new
things
 but they focus on a present which they want to a specialist in a category that they prefer to spend the time for it like a routine
job
thus
 they satisfied for their
job
 and do not need to change the
job
 which they interested to another
job
 which they must use a time for learning.
On the other hand
, learning, which is the new thing that you do not know before studying, is an opportunity for the future,
for instance
, it makes
people
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explore the world that makes experience to them and
job
 which work relate to the idea will receive a benefit from learning the new
things
.
Moreover
, open-mind
people
 for new
things
 can get knowledge in various types,
for example
, if you are good at mathematics even you do badly in English so you can learn
this
 subject to improve yourself but if you do not open your mind, you were not a day to good in English. In conclusion, doing something until becoming a specialist is a benefit for yourself but would it be better to learn something new for improving yourself and the opportunities will come in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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