Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

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Some
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think that they like a routine activity during the day. So they do not want to change
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. While many
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like to learn new
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which make active to them nowadays. In the following paragraph, a reason to support my opinion will be discussed.
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someone feels excited to learn about the different
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which they used not to do, some
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like to do similar
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as they do not open-mind about learning new
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but they focus on a present which they want to a specialist in a category that they prefer to spend the time for it like a routine
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they satisfied for their
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and do not need to change the
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which they interested to another
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which they must use a time for learning.
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, learning, which is the new thing that you do not know before studying, is an opportunity for the future,
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, it makes
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explore the world that makes experience to them and
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which work relate to the idea will receive a benefit from learning the new
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, open-mind
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for new
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can get knowledge in various types,
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, if you are good at mathematics even you do badly in English so you can learn
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subject to improve yourself but if you do not open your mind, you were not a day to good in English. In conclusion, doing something until becoming a specialist is a benefit for yourself but would it be better to learn something new for improving yourself and the opportunities will come in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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