Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycle is better. Discuss both point of views and give your opinion

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Cars
and
bicycles
are provided to
use
as travellers' vehicles in a city. Some
people
believe that one of them is more useful than the other one. In my opinion,
cars
are better for
use
in a city.
First
of all,
cars
are more convenient. They have made after bicycle, so they have more options. One of these facilities is pace.
For example
, When you can get to your destination faster by car, you
use
the car to reach on
time
. In the new era,
time
is an important factor of life and
cars
are saving our
time
by going faster and faster. Indeed, they save our
time
and they are more convenient
also
. So we can find some rest and
time
even during the route of destination.
Although
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traffic is a negative factor for
time
-saving, you can escape it by going outside in none rush
time
.
On the other hand
, some
people
say that
bicycles
are providing good weather without pollution for us.
Moreover
, they believe that
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this
kind of vehicle not only is useful for the body by its cycling, but
also
it has a positive point in our mind due to inhaling fresh air.
For instance
, some
people
in the countryside who
use
bicycles
are healthier than those in cities that
use
cars
But in my idea, if you travel by bicycle in urban you can not reach your destination on
time
,
thus
you can not do all your jobs in the exact
time
.
Therefore
your mind will be influenced by
this
.
Furthermore
, doing jobs in the cities need more mind power, so you do not have enough physical power to cycle. In conclusion,
bicycles
are not convenient and fast as
cars
.
Cars
are more useful in cities while
people
in the countryside can
use
bicycles
as better vehicles.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • comfort
  • faster transportation
  • flexibility
  • routes
  • destinations
  • passengers
  • loads
  • health benefits
  • environmental benefits
  • sustainable lifestyle
  • cost-effective
  • maneuverability
  • congested areas
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