Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled.they say that only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Some are of the view that insufficient recycled of domestic

waste

and express that the only approach to

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the number

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recycling rate is for authority to make it

legal

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requirement.to a large extent I agree with

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suggested viewpoint.my preference is justified

further

. The fundamental argument is that

people

can aware with

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the law

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to recycle of their household

waste

.

goverment

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government

should make

strict

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rule to overcome the

waste

material.they

also

do

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for

people

watch and understand the importance of recycling.more and more citizens become using a variety of products and after been used they throw into dustbin

although

it could

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in different kinds of things which

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from

waste

.

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add to the mentioned point without any act against

waste

recycle

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people

started throwing

waste

anywhere and

this

make

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various health problems.

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state should put different dustbins on the city streets that encourage society to throw

waste

into them.

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contrary

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it should not be disregarded that there

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no need to make rules on recycling of

waste

because

of

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nowadays

people

are aware

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this

and definitely know the crucial of recycling even the school

also

teaches pupils about recycling of domestic

waste

. To conclude it can be eventually commented that

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are essential to make person recycle their daily

waste

.

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believe that government should make

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department to handle all

this

recycling situation and to ensure citizens about laws.