A Museum Near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary / unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary / unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work. In your letter - explain why you want to do voluntary / unpaid work at the museum - describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter with regard to inform you that I am interested in the part-time voluntary job which was mentioned in yesterday newspaper. I would like to apply for that job. My name is Yan and I am a part-time university student from Teesside. As a part-time student, I have plenty of spare time to do things which is useful to me. I consider voluntary work for museums to be a kind of interesting thing to me because I am really interested in arts and history.

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, I do understand that voluntary work is a sort of helping to society. Another thing that I choose for

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job is the location of your museum. It is near my house around the corner of my street. I am good at some computer skills

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as Microsoft word, excel, PowerPoint...etc. I am not sure what kind of specific skill are you looking for but I hope, the skills that I have would be fulfilled your expectation. I will be available every weekend and on public holidays from 10 am to 5pm. I would appreciate it if you can give me the lunch break around 12 to 1 pm. I look forward to hearing from you soon about

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. Yours faithfully, Yan

yannaunghlaingFri Feb 04 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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Enthusiastic
Volunteer
Part-time
Unpaid work
Museum director
Skills and qualities
Customer service
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Team player
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Reliable
Positive attitude
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Professional goals
Community contribution
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