In the past important knowledge of culture and history was started in museums nowady information is freely available on internet therefore is no longer need for museum. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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History
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plays
salient
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role in our life as it tells us about the incidents that happened in the past.
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, it is reckoned by certain individuals that owing to the availability of modern technologies like
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, we do not need
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to confer
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about past and culture. I partially agree with
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notion, since both
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are significant
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their own
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. Initiating with most paramount reason how
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provide
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us details about
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history
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, it allows
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to explore all the past of world by sitting at one
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comfortably.To elaborate it, with the aid of
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one can easily get interact with people of other cultures and can know about the
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and traditions of their culture without travelling to their native nation.
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year when
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pandemic was going on,a school in France organized
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museum event through
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in which they showed the ancient items and wax statues of
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museum;
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can be used in the
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of
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.
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,
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can be replaced by
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, to get real interaction of ancient things like
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,
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of kings and to receive genuine details about them a person
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to visit
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.To explicate it, when we visit
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we can see and feel the presence of old items in front of our eyes, which is not possible on
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as well as we
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get real knowledge about those items from the
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worker of
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, while on
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there might be a chance to get incorrect
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.
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, according to the survey of times of India 40 to 50
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of
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on
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is false, since
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offers everyone to upload any
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about anything without verifying it.
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,
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are best to get authentic details about
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. To conclude, there are certain limitations to
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at the
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of
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even though
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is capable of providing knowledge about
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.Personally, I believe
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are needed to render
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to our upcoming generations.
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, their use should be regulated

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • invaluable
  • interactive
  • exhibit
  • artifacts
  • preserve
  • contextualize
  • authentic
  • curate
  • promote
  • educate
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