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In the past important knowledge of culture and history was started in museums nowady information is freely available on internet therefore is no longer need for museum. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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History
 plays
salient
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 role in our life as it tells us about the incidents that happened in the past.
Nevertheless
, it is reckoned by certain individuals that owing to the availability of modern technologies like
internet
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, we do not need
museums
 to confer
information
 about past and culture. I partially agree with
this
 notion, since both
internet
 and
museums
 are significant
at
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 their own
place
. Initiating with most paramount reason how
internet
provide
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 us details about
history
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the history
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, it allows
person
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a person
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 to explore all the past of world by sitting at one
place
 comfortably.To elaborate it, with the aid of
internet
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 one can easily get interact with people of other cultures and can know about the
history
 and traditions of their culture without travelling to their native nation.
For instance
,
last
 year when
corona
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 pandemic was going on,a school in France organized
digital
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 museum event through
internet
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the internet
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 in which they showed the ancient items and wax statues of
London
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 museum;
therefore
,
internet
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the internet
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 can be used in the
place
 of
museums
.
Although
,
museums
 can be replaced by
internet
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the internet
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 , to get real interaction of ancient things like
sword
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,
crown
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the crown
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 of kings and to receive genuine details about them a person
have
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 to visit
museums
.To explicate it, when we visit
museums
 we can see and feel the presence of old items in front of our eyes, which is not possible on
internet
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 as well as we
also
 get real knowledge about those items from the
experience
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 worker of
museums
, while on
internet
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 there might be a chance to get incorrect
information
.
For example
, according to the survey of times of India 40 to 50
percent
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 of
information
 on
internet
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 is false, since
internet
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 offers everyone to upload any
information
 about anything without verifying it.
Hence
,
museums
 are best to get authentic details about
history
. To conclude, there are certain limitations to
use
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internet
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 at the
place
 of
museums
 even though
internet
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 is capable of providing knowledge about
history
.Personally, I believe
Museums
 are needed to render
information
 to our upcoming generations.
Consequently
, their use should be regulated
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • invaluable
  • interactive
  • exhibit
  • artifacts
  • preserve
  • contextualize
  • authentic
  • curate
  • promote
  • educate
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