the best way to cut down crime rate is by building more prisons and giving longer sentences. do you agree or disagree?
In
this
modern era, crime has became
a major issue in every part of Change the verb form
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and it is believed by many that the most effective way to decrease Correct your spelling
world
number
of offences is by building more prisons and giving stronger punishments to offenders. Change the article
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However
, I disagree with this
statement and the reasons to support my belief will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, prisons are necessary as they definitely help in controlling crimes. Many small time
criminals if given stronger punishments will reluctant to commit Add a hyphen
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crime
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crimes
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time and some repeat offenders if kept behind bars for a long time will not be able to commit any heinous. For example
, usually
rapists and serial killers are given life imprisonment so it is best that they stay away from society.
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Nevertheless
, finding the root cause of this
chronic disease will be more effective in getting rid of the problem permanently. Often, most of the offences registered are due to adverse situations or frustrations which are induced because of inequality and stress. So, meeting up with the daily necessities of people, building more rehabilitation centres and educational premises will certainly decrease the pressure on general
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For instance
, many developed countries like Canada, are providing
free basic education and medical facilities, have different tax slabs Wrong verb form
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financial status which certainly gives a sense of freedom and stability. Add the preposition
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This
helped people relieving
their stress and resulted in Wrong verb form
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decrease
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a decrease
the decrease
of
offences in the country.
To summarise, cutting down Change preposition
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rate is one of Correct article usage
the crime
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the upmost
upmost
priority issues that need to Correct your spelling
utmost
addressed
and there are many ways to do so. Add a missing verb
be addressed
Therefore
, it can be inferred that though, prisons are necessary to keep criminals behind bars so that they can reflect on their demeanour but it is not the only way as discussed above.Submitted by gupta.manish867 on
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