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the best way to cut down crime rate is by building more prisons and giving longer sentences. do you agree or disagree?

#crime #rate #prisons #sentences
In
this
 modern era, crime has
became
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 a major issue in every part of
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 and it is believed by many that the most effective way to decrease
number
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 of offences is by building more prisons and giving stronger punishments to offenders.
However
, I disagree with
this
 statement and the reasons to support my belief will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, prisons are necessary as they definitely help in controlling crimes. Many
small time
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 criminals if given stronger punishments will reluctant to commit
crime
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next
 time and some repeat offenders if kept behind bars for a long time will not be able to commit any heinous.
For example
,
usually
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 rapists and serial killers are given life imprisonment so it is best that they stay away from society.
Nevertheless
, finding the root cause of
this
 chronic disease will be more effective in getting rid of the problem permanently. Often, most of the offences registered are due to adverse situations or frustrations which are induced because of inequality and stress. So, meeting up with the daily necessities of people, building more rehabilitation centres and educational premises will certainly decrease the pressure on
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 public.
For instance
, many developed countries like Canada, are
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 free basic education and medical facilities, have different tax slabs
according
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 financial status which certainly gives a sense of freedom and stability.
This
 helped people
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 their stress and resulted in
decrease
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a decrease
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of
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 offences in the country. To summarise, cutting down
crime
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the crime
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 rate is one of
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the upmost
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upmost
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 priority issues that need to
addressed
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 and there are many ways to do so.
Therefore
, it can be inferred that though, prisons are necessary to keep criminals behind bars so that they can reflect on their demeanour but it is not the only way as discussed above.
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