increasing the price of high-sugar products would be whether an appropriate method to reduce health issues or not.

Nowadays, with the growth of food industries, many people are at risk of unhealthy food
products
. There is a discussion that increasing the price of high-sugar
products
would be whether an appropriate method to reduce health issues or not. I am in disagreement with
this
standpoint due to making social and economic problems. My reasons are as follows. In the
first
place,
this
may cause class distinction in
society
. In fact, by raising the price of sugary
products
, many cannot afford these
products
owing to being less-paid or from impoverished families;
consequently
, the gap between disparate classes of the
society
is going to become bigger and bigger.
For instance
, many foreign food
products
,
such
as chocolates and exotic fruits, are prohibitively expensive in Iran, which would be unaffordable for numerous individuals in
this
country.
Thus
,
this
idea might possibly have a negative influence on the public.
Furthermore
, forcing businesses to increase their sugary items may conceivably trigger damage on the market.
In other words
, a lot of manufacturers and producers have to reduce their production provided that the number of their customers declines;
subsequently
,
this
would spearhead many companies and businesses, particularly small ones, to end up with bankruptcy like pastries.
Then
,
this
ideology may give rise to mass unemployment in
society
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. To sum up, according to what is aforementioned, I am
in contrast
with rising sugary
products
cost, for reduce the health-related problems, on account of bringing other insurmountable difficulties like societal gap and economic problems for the
society
.
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