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increasing the price of high-sugar products would be whether an appropriate method to reduce health issues or not.

Nowadays, with the growth of food industries, many people are at risk of unhealthy food
products
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. There is a discussion that increasing the price of high-sugar
products
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 would be whether an appropriate method to reduce health issues or not. I am in disagreement with
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 standpoint due to making social and economic problems. My reasons are as follows. In the
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 place,
this
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 may cause class distinction in
society
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. In fact, by raising the price of sugary
products
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, many cannot afford these
products
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 owing to being less-paid or from impoverished families;
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, the gap between disparate classes of the
society
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 is going to become bigger and bigger.
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, many foreign food
products
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,
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 as chocolates and exotic fruits, are prohibitively expensive in Iran, which would be unaffordable for numerous individuals in
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 country.
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,
this
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 idea might possibly have a negative influence on the public.
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, forcing businesses to increase their sugary items may conceivably trigger damage on the market.
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, a lot of manufacturers and producers have to reduce their production provided that the number of their customers declines;
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,
this
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 would spearhead many companies and businesses, particularly small ones, to end up with bankruptcy like pastries.
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,
this
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 ideology may give rise to mass unemployment in
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society
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. To sum up, according to what is aforementioned, I am
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 with rising sugary
products
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 cost, for reduce the health-related problems, on account of bringing other insurmountable difficulties like societal gap and economic problems for the
society
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.

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