In some cultures old age is more valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion

A few individuals are of opinion that old

people

are more crucial for the welfare of society.

However

, others give priority to the youngsters.

This

essay will provide an in-depth analysis of both views along with my perspective in the

last

. To embark on, the

first

and the foremost reason, why senior citizens have considered gold is because of the knowledge and experiences they had. To explicate, they guide the younger generation towards the problem they have to face in life and ready-made answer to those stumbling obstacles so that they can achieve their goals effortlessly.

Additionally

, the old

people

value more of their traditions. To be more specific, they are alike a book which contains vast information about the culture and their corresponding customs and assist the

people

to remain

touch

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with the soil from where they had born.

Thus

elder populace, help to know the worth of the old beliefs. On the flip side, another section of the nation gives more importance to youth .

Firstly

, some individuals give their opinion that they are

asset

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an asset

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of the country. To explain, they are the young blood of the country and has the power to achieve goals

which

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are not only beneficial for them but for all provinces .

For instance

, a survey conducted by BBC stated that the portion of the young

people

was more in converting an underdeveloped bucolic to a developed one. To conclude, in my view both the age groups contribute a vital role in the development of the nation as one help us to remain in touch with one old

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and maintain originality while other look after the new approach that can be used for the up-gradation of the nation.