The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Smoking is a well-known
problem
worldwide. There are many strategies and methods used in different countries to prevent smoking. A lot of research have been done to
proof
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the dangers of smoking and its connection with cancer and other health issues.
However
, even with all
this
knowledge about health damage,
people
still smoke. In
this
essay, I will discuss
problem
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the problem
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of smoking and the possible solutions.
Firstly
, many
people
smoke even when they know the consequences of it.
For instance
, in many countries
cigarettes
have labels with precautions and
list
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a list
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of possible
illness
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that might be caused. Yet a lot of
people
still
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buy
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cigarettes
and tobacco. Many smokers try to quit several times before they manage to quit for good.
People
know about risks, but smoking is widely accepted in our society, just like other unhealthy things. You can see a lot of
people
around and even movie characters smoking.
Secondly
,
solution
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the solution
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to
this
question is complex.
For example
,
cigarettes
might have high taxes, but it can result only in
people
paying more. To stop
this
trend,
government
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the government
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should access the
problem
on
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all stages. One of
possible
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the possible
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solutions is
prohibition
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the prohibition
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of wide PR and marketing of
cigarettes
. The other one is to forbid smoking in public places. If smoking will be hard and uncomfortable, it will be
more easy
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to drop, and harder for new smokers to start. To summarize, a difficult
problem
as smoking should be
dialed
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on a few levels. Smokers should receive help and support while trying to quit.
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