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Nowadays many people chose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Which might be this the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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Actually, these days the number of freelancers is drastically increasing. Since being self-employed is getting beneficial for
people
 with opportunities that it creates, even company workers are choosing it.
However
, there are drawbacks to freelancing that will be given in
further
 paragraphs. To start with, many human beings who
work
 for some organizations are losing the desire to go on employing in a strictly framed
work
.
Consequently
, as the conditions of freelancing
is
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 more flexible and create
the
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freedom for
people
 rather than an ordinary job, the number of self-employed
people
 is rising day by day.
For instance
, copywriting is
also
 a freelancing job when a person writes and sell
the
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texts for advertisement or publicity materials. Copywriters are scheduling a worktime and the conditions of working on their own which might eliminate the fact of pressure or stress in comparison to company
work
.
Thus
, being able to be self-employed create good standards to
work
 and increase the amount of salary.
However
, the disadvantages cannot be ignored. The freelancer could spend some period of time working on projects alone. So it could lead to losing communication skills and working collectively with
people
.
Moreover
, the risk of getting no earnings is high since it depends on clients orders. Occasionally the demand for service of freelancers may decrease.
Also
, the cons could be the phenomenon of distractions while working. At any time your friends or other potential disturbances may occur so it is required to be well-organized and self-concentrated.
Otherwise
, it might affect on projects deadline and
following
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 your plans. To conclude,
this
 type of
work
 have drawbacks that
requires
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from
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self-employed
people
 a high awareness of the situation and at the same time offers many flexible chances to increase
the
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 income and create enough good living conditions.
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