Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at school. To what extant do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The company's short-term assets at the end of 2020 are VND 45,352,089,327, accounting for 87.06% of total assets and down 1.82% compared to the beginning of the year. The main reason was that other
receivables
decreased by VND 7,550,489,234 (98.21%) causing short-term
receivables
to decrease by 19.05%, a small decrease compared to the capital size of the enterprise.
However
, the
receivables
showing signs of bad debt are increasing, which requires enterprises to strengthen the management of
receivables
.
Besides
, inventories
also
decreased sharply by 3,772,763,501 (14,56%). Meanwhile, Cash and cash equivalent increased by VND 3,239,363,446 ( 235.06%) compared to the beginning of the year. The reason
this
item increased so strongly was due to the high demand for medical equipment
such
as ventilators in the past year due to the Covid-19 pandemic. With a high level of debt and capital occupation, it is necessary to actively increase cash reserves to ensure the initiative in quick payment.
Although
the Covid-19 epidemic caused the global economy to fall into recession, it made the company's trade-in medical supplies more
favorable
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educationalists
  • international exchange visits
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • outweigh
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • school
  • exposes
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
  • enhances
  • language skills
  • promotes
  • independence
  • self-confidence
  • builds
  • lifelong friendships
  • provides
  • unique learning experiences
  • expensive
  • homesickness
  • emotional distress
  • careful planning
  • logistical arrangements
  • disrupt
  • academic progress
  • safety
  • security risks
  • cultural appropriation
  • misunderstandings
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