In some cultures old age is more valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Nowadays,the significance of older
people
has been decreasing drastically as they do not have Use synonyms
capability
to do work,so in some Change the article
the capability
nations
youngsters are more prominent compared to aged Add a comma
,nations
people
.Use synonyms
this
essay will go into better detail on both the cases with my subject view.
Linking Words
To embark
on,there are many merits of having elder Fix the infinitive
Embark
people
in a family.Use synonyms
firstly
,already they had Linking Words
a
experience about how Change the article
an
the
life was and how Correct article usage
apply
much
struggles they had confronted ,so they use to guide like how to survive in the competitive world as well as what precaution will you take in the future to lead a luxurious life.Correct quantifier usage
many
secondly
,they are ready to contribute their life when their children's are in hurdles and they Linking Words
do not never reject
to their offsprings if their family ask anything want.Rewrite the sentence
never reject
do not ever reject
for instance
,my grandparents are omniscient and benevolent persons.because if I ask anything about the world,they use to tell which one is correct or wrong Linking Words
also
give some suggestions.
On another hand,due to the advancement of technology many individuals believe that adolescents are very dominant for shielding the culture,because they are the nation's future as using their acquaintance they can Linking Words
improves
the quality of our literature.Change the verb form
improve
moreover
,by encouraging and allowing opportunities for youths bring more development in our tradition.Linking Words
furthermore
,youngsters have a capability to renew and refresh the current situation of our society.Linking Words
for example
,according to the survey,teenagers are the main reason for advancement technology,because they have created ample amenities with their skills like metro stations and electronic gadgets,because they are well-educated,Linking Words
therefore
they know everything about the county.
To conclude,it is truly said,old is gold,Linking Words
thus
everyone must compensate significance to old age Linking Words
people
because they do not have other persons to look after them.Use synonyms
In contrast
,youngsters are the backbone of Linking Words
nation
,so every teenager should be encouraged to study about Add an article
the nation
a nation
world
.Add an article
the world
finally
,both generations Linking Words
are play
Change the verb form
are playing
are played
dominant
role in our culture.Add an article
a dominant
the dominant
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