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Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

#cohabitation #people
There is no denying the fact that the main purpose of
cohabitation
 is arguable. some of the
people
 with agree whit and their other teams do not agree for many reasons. while it is held belief,
cohabitation
 has some advantages for young
people
 to can understand each other before getting married , because the couples can recognize each other habits ,in reality , so they can decide if they can deal with it or not , before they get married
then
 face many problems because they cannot except some habits. the other reason, they believe some
people
 do not want to get married in hole life to many cause , but they want to practise their life without any lack so
this
 is the solution if they both agree like Shakira and Pique. on another hand, the
people
 who do not like
this
 , because they think everything will change after getting married , because of the community ideas about married. so in their ,opinion
cohabitation
 is no solution to reduce divorce cases , as the statistics during the
last
 year in many countries.
Also
 , there are some regulations and cultures that do not prefer that, like the Islamic community. which is a big mistake when it happened. in my opinion ,
cohabitation
 is not the solution to anything , but we can say it is a lifestyle to many
people
 , but for ,me I do not prefer
this
 type of life, because I think many
people
 around the world do not know the father , he left the mother easily because he does not
this
 kind of responsibility.
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  • compatibility
  • habits
  • preferences
  • conflict-resolution
  • deal-breakers
  • financial responsibilities
  • domestic tasks
  • realistic view
  • emotional trust
  • deepening the bond
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