IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasins for this? How can people research this?

#countries #people #history #house #reasins #research
Year after year, the number of
people
 who are interesting to learn about the history of
buildings
 and Architecture, is increasing enormously, but what makes
people
 love
this
 field and how we can look for
this
 information,
that is
 what we will discuss in
this
 essay. Hundreds of years, the progress of constructing a new building is continuing, including different designs and Architectures, today, loads of
people
 like to check out different techniques and technologies of houses and
buildings
 they live in, many of them want to know about the culture of every building and the decoration they used in them, some scientists need to look for
variety
Add an article
a variety
show examples
 of materials that they used for constructing them because there are many
buildings
 which are still existing for over 500 years, and there are some temples which were built before 3000 years
such
 pyramids of Egypt, in spite of
this
, there are many
people
 complain about their houses because they are not enough strong to face bad weather like storms, and other natural disasters. In order to get informed about the history of
buildings
, there are many organizations, whose role is to protect the heritage of the past like UNESCO
for example
 and many of them are programming many events for
people
 who are concerned about urban structure. In terms of tourism, there are many old cities in the world
such
 as Egypt, Jordan, France where there are many fascinating structures and houses which are worth visiting them,
in addition
, many universities in the world where many students can learn about the development of the
buildings
 starting from the past. In conclusion,
people
 tend to learn about the history of their
buildings
 because they know the importance of
this
 subject and they want to preserve
this
 heritage for a new generation.
Submitted by rechoum Mohamed on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: