It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parent and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

The difference between

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, which they do right and wrong, is essential learning that they do a

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,

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they have

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a

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. So,

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is a dramatic situation for learning. In the following paragraph, a reason to support my opinion will be outlined. The

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is a benefit for

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because when if they make a

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, they were received the

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by not only teachers but parents

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do a similar

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.

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will teach the

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to learn about if they grow in a future and they have a

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in that day

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as fraud in a company, problems with other people in a community and lawless, these will make them receive the

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by regulation which makes people

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live in peace.

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, the

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who received the

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can adapt themselves for the future. So adapting, which is easier when they were young, is an essential living of

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in the future.

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, the

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can make aggressive behaviour for

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. If the regulation is not a relative

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as they make a little

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, while the

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is a huge

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more than the thing which

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do, so it is not unfair for them.

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, they will not understand why they received a heavy

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, after that, they will have aggressive behaviour and break any rule.

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, the worst case they will be a thieve and murder if we do not solve and ignore

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problem. In conclusion,

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the

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is the essential control which makes

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in the rules, the heavy rules for

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more punish than

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mistake

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, it will make aggressive behaviour to

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. So, the best way for

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is a step for

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which have three violent-steps by 1, 2 and 3 respectively.