Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?

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proper attention. Psychological
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problems became
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lowering. The vast majority of us are
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residents
of metropolitan areas and it has a number of benefits
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to rural ones.
However
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brings different challenges which could be considered as a prime cause of
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world it is vital to
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of vehicles, work rush and limited time for a rest with a permanent search of ways to earn
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all factors that contribute to our state of depression.
In addition
, modern human tends to postpone
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minor problems
because of being involved in those factors which were mentioned above. We consider money and our
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jobs
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. And even thought of losing an occupation is able to bring
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pack of negative emotions. The
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serum is quite complex.
Initially
, it is fundamental to keep yourself in
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state
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of being
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. Secondary - hardworking should be replaced by simple prolific
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working days
with intervals for relaxation. And the
last
but not least is trying not to take all responsibilities on your
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own shoulders
. To sum up, unfortunately, I can't help admitting the fact that
stress
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problem which leads to lots of
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health problems
, but it doesn't suppose that it is
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impossible
to cure. More and more methods against depression and
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stress are
stress
being found these days that works in practice. All we need is treating to ourselves carefully
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