Write a letter to a newspaper editor about the poor condition of a historic building in your area. In the letter you should What building are you writing about? Describe the current condition of the building What should be done in this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention
that
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some historic buildings in
Damietta
are in bad shape and they need some care. I would be happy if you consider
this
issue favourably. My name is Jay, I live in
Damietta
, and I have been reading your articles for more than five years so far.
Although
Damietta
is a well-organized city, a few historical places there lack care.
For example
, the Mosque of Taha, the Old Mill
building
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, and
University
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of
Damietta
's building. Let me describe the current condition of the buildings.
Firstly
, their walls are about to fall.
Secondly
, there is not enough light at these crucial places.
Finally
, there is no security system installed inside most of those
building
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, which could be unsafe. I would like to ask you to raise the alarm and write an article about
this
topic so that your article could draw more attention and urge people to take swift actions to solve
this
matter. I appreciate your consideration in
this
matter. Best regards, Jay
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