Write a letter to a newspaper editor about the poor condition of a historic building in your area. In the letter you should What building are you writing about? Describe the current condition of the building What should be done in this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention
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some historic buildings in
Damietta
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are in bad shape and they need some care. I would be happy if you consider
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issue favourably. My name is Jay, I live in
Damietta
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, and I have been reading your articles for more than five years so far.
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Damietta
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is a well-organized city, a few historical places there lack care.
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, and
University
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of
Damietta
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's building. Let me describe the current condition of the buildings.
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, their walls are about to fall.
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, there is not enough light at these crucial places.
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, there is no security system installed inside most of those
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, which could be unsafe. I would like to ask you to raise the alarm and write an article about
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topic so that your article could draw more attention and urge people to take swift actions to solve
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matter. I appreciate your consideration in
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matter. Best regards, Jay
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