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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should bebanned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#smoker #places
Smoking is harmful to
people
 who consume it and others around them.Some
people
thinks
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 that it is necessary
toimpose
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to impose
 a strict ban
smoking
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on smoking
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 in public places.
This
 essay agrees with
statement
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that
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apply
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mentioned above,it is
useful
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a useful
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wayto
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way to
 save
of
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apply
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public
health
. It is generally proven with scientific studies that smoking
harmful
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is harmful
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 to
health
. Smoking leads to disease and
disabilityand
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disability and
disability
 harms nearly every organ of
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body
bady
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.Smoking causes cancer,heart disease,stroke,lung diseases,
diabets
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diabetes
andchronic
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and chronic
bronchits
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bronchitis
.In other work ,
the
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 cigarette is
kind
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a kind
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 of drug and brings a lot of
damege
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damage
 on
people
 who are
aroundthem
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around them
 .If
government
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the government
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 could ban smoking in public places it will avoid damages and
helps
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 save public
health
.
In
addition
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this
 statement is
very
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 useful way to protect children and teenagers.Some
people
 say that tobacco
canreduce
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can reduce
 huge pressure ,and calm them down when they are stressful.No matter how
people
 smoke it,tobacco
isdangerous
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is dangerous
dangerous
 to
health
.there are no safe substances in any tobacco
pruducts
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products
,from acetone to nicotine and
carbonmonoxide
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carbon monoxide
.The substances
inhale
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 do not just affect lungs.They can affect
entire
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the entire
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 body. To conclude ,
i
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 strongly agree with
statement
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the statement
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 and view
that
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mentioned above of
forbiding
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forbidding
 smoking in public areas
tosave
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to save
 and protect not only
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the smoker
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smoker
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smokers
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 but those who are around them.
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