In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shipping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays,many individuals tend to purchase products in famous

malls

rather than small

shops

,

therefore

street shopping has been drastically deteriorating day by day,it leads to

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their business in loss,so they halted their

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.In my view,there are positive outcomes to

this

development and

this

essay will go into better detail on both the cases with my subject view. To embark on,there are multiple reasons why local stores are ceased.

firstly

,they do not enable

good

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quality of articles to consumers in terms of clothes,

quantity

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of that particular material.

secondly

, they do not put any discounts and sell to customers at higher prices.

moreover

.they do not design unique clothes

it

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leads to people preferences are decreasing.

for instance

,recently I bought a dress from the local shop,I got a

damage

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material as well as cheap quality,from

then

I have decided not to buy articles at

a small

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a small shop

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shops

,

thus

these days,I started doing shopping in

a

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a mall

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malls

. On another hand,there are numerous benefits by taking products in large

malls

including price,quality and extra amenities.

initially

,they furnish unique designer pieces as well as

long lasting

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dresses available.

furthermore

,not only

they

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provide discounts but

also

ensure additional facilities for children like games as well as food items,so we need not go to other places to consume.

additionally

,In some stores,vegetables and fruits are available these are very fresh because they

are try

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to keep these materials in separate boxes.

for example

,one month ago I went big shopping mall with my children's.unfortunately,they were crying for games at that time I did not understand how to stop them from crying.suddenly I saw a

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playground

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play ground

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around me

then

I took them to

play ground

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,

thus

I always prefer to go

malls

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to malls

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. To conclude,everyone has to wear

a

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stylish clothes,so many individuals tend to go

large

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to large

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shops

.

In contrast

,some people do not like

to

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apply

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the service of local

shops

,

therefore

these

shops

have ceased.