In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shipping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays,many individuals tend to purchase products in famous
malls
rather than small
shops
,
therefore
street shopping has been drastically deteriorating day by day,it leads to
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their business in loss,so they halted their
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.In my view,there are positive outcomes to
this
development and
this
essay will go into better detail on both the cases with my subject view. To embark on,there are multiple reasons why local stores are ceased.
firstly
,they do not enable
good
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quality of articles to consumers in terms of clothes,
quantity
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of that particular material.
secondly
, they do not put any discounts and sell to customers at higher prices.
moreover
.they do not design unique clothes
it
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leads to people preferences are decreasing.
for instance
,recently I bought a dress from the local shop,I got a
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material as well as cheap quality,from
then
I have decided not to buy articles at
a small
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a small shop
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shops
,
thus
these days,I started doing shopping in
a
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a mall
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malls
. On another hand,there are numerous benefits by taking products in large
malls
including price,quality and extra amenities.
initially
,they furnish unique designer pieces as well as
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dresses available.
furthermore
,not only
they
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provide discounts but
also
ensure additional facilities for children like games as well as food items,so we need not go to other places to consume.
additionally
,In some stores,vegetables and fruits are available these are very fresh because they
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to keep these materials in separate boxes.
for example
,one month ago I went big shopping mall with my children's.unfortunately,they were crying for games at that time I did not understand how to stop them from crying.suddenly I saw a
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play ground
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around me
then
I took them to
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,
thus
I always prefer to go
malls
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. To conclude,everyone has to wear
a
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stylish clothes,so many individuals tend to go
large
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to large
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shops
.
In contrast
,some people do not like
to
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the service of local
shops
,
therefore
these
shops
have ceased.
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