What are some of these changes in family structure and roles? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

In recent years, there have been substantial changes in family structure and roles, including
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of
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. Some people think these developments have more advantages while others believe they will have an adverse effect on society. Personally, I reckon that these social transformations would benefit people’s lives. Currently,
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’s roles have changed. It is
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fact that in the past, most
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were housewives–doing domestic duties and looking after their children all day.
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, today most
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focus on their working lives more than household chores; some stay single and dedicate their time to climbing their corporate ladder.
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change in
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’s
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roles
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has
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contributed to the change in family structure. Unlike the past, in which big
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are the majority, today most
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become smaller.
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little family consists of only parents and children, and in some cases, there are only a wife and a husband. Their relatives like grandparents stay in other places and meet other extended
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only
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some festivals. With respect to consequences from
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the above
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changes, there would be an advantage to
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who are widely accepted in their careers. As people thought
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must be housewives in the past, important positions in many organizations would be only for men, leading to
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earnings and less career growth. Nowadays,
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could move up the ladder to higher-responsible roles and get more income than men if they have a great performance.
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to the
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’s role, the change in
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of the family is a positive development because it would lead to
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financial status of the family. It is common if there are fewer family members,
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consumer
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spending
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on necessities
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as housing,
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food
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, education, and medicines.
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, the family could have more savings, and they could spend on what they want. In conclusion, the role of
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in the family and the smaller family’s size are key current social transformations for us. From my perspective, these lead to less inequality in
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’s working life and better financial conditions, which would be positive for most people.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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