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In developing countries, rural children have less access to education. Some people say that the problem can be solved by providing schools and teachers. Others say that computers and internet should be provided. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In many developing countries,
children
 are facing an issue called not having enough access to education. In
this
 regard, it is proposed that providing schools is an effective way
although
 many disagree and believe that other measures are needed.
This
 essay will explore both aspects of
this
 discussion. Many support the view that
this
 problem can be solved by providing schools. It does have some benefits.
For instance
, it can provide a place to keep
children
 motivated to continue with their education and they can
also
 have access to variable resources and facilities which they can share similar goals with other like_minded individuals.
On the other hand
, many support the idea of providing computers and other electronic devices. The government should play an important role in solving
this
 issue, unfortunately as the studies have shown they don't take responsibility,
although
 we have the internet but not the right substructures for making
this
 dream come true for those poor kids. National campaigns and advertisements should be launched to educate people about the importance of
this
 issue and if possible, to gain money to invest in
this
 infrastructure. Weighing up both sides of the argument, both ideas should be supported and taken into action because
children
 need access to the best facilities through their studying years. Personally, the government and the citizens all have a responsibility in
this
 process to motivate
children
 to keep on and make them hopeful about the future they wish for.
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